I Will Live Poem by Kyle Jones

I Will Live

Rating: 5.0


Everytime my eyelids fall
Night after night in all my dreams
I see you, I feel you, and that is all
I need to know that my heart still screams

Easily across this distance
And all the miles apart
The echoes and resonance
Of your name from my heart

Wherever to you ran away
I believe that our hearts still go on
For once you've come inside the doorway
You'll remain till we're gone

Love can't touch us one at a time
And of that I am sincerely sure
My love for you pursues a lifetime
And will fade away nevermore

Joy was when I loved you
True joy was when you loved me back
And though we've fallen apart it's true
my mind's on a one way track

One day I swear it
Like only lord knew
I will live until I hear the words from your lips
'I love you too'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Delilah Miller 14 July 2008

There was another layer in this poem that I can't quite figure out. Maybe it's all black and white as it's written to sound, but I think you put another emotion into it and I like it. Great job

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Evaughn Gray 16 July 2008

that almost made me cry..i'm so sorry..~Heart Broken Eva,

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Shalini Kts 14 August 2008

nice poem with much of emotions

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Sarwar Chowdhury 23 August 2008

....finely composed........thanks

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Ashraful Musaddeq 11 September 2008

Nice poem with a beautiful ending.

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Beautifully written... But it makes me wonder who was the inspiration from...? Love it, just like all the others. -Trysta

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Janell Cressman 29 September 2009

an amazing poem! ! ! ! very well written

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Angelic Warrior 19 June 2009

absolutely beautiful...sounds like it should be a song..... :) .....i love it 10+++

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 14 April 2009

a poignant poem..well versed and an outstanding poem great job

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Nangula Immanuel 13 April 2009

Great stuff! ! perhaps you could read some of mine N.N.

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Kyle Jones

Kyle Jones

Tegucigalpa: Honduras: Carribean
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