I Will Miss You Poem by Neil Godden

I Will Miss You

Rating: 4.9


I will miss you, more than miss you when I die,
And lost will be the light of many Suns.
Silently, like you, I'll wait and cry.
Until the day we are together once more comes.

Until that day I'll be with you alone,
As every absent day, begins its start.
Be sure that when you cry I cry with you,
Our mirrored pain so heavy in our hearts.

I'll smile when you smile too,
On days that don't seem quite as bad,
When faint memories return, of the special love we had.
And if only for a second, the Sun returns again
I'll be with you in the sunshine of the memories that remain.

In my heart and yours one truth, forever true,
As we share our thoughts with watchful stars above,
You are part me, as I am part of you,
And there is nothing, nothing deeper than our love.

Saturday, August 2, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 02 August 2014

thoughts with watchful stars, good writing, thanks.

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Valerie Dohren 02 August 2014

Quite beautiful Neil, and very poignant. Loss from the perspective of the one who has passed away - very insightful, like it very much. Very well written.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 03 August 2014

Lovely piece. When my husband passed on I was very worried he'd forget me.

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Jazib Kamalvi 14 December 2019

Such a nice poem, Neillg. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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James Gaskin 03 July 2016

Beautiful, very moving!

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 November 2015

You are part me, as I am part of you, And there is nothing, nothing deeper than our love. very nice and touching poem. very romantic poem. thank you

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Kelly Kurt 27 August 2015

A touching poem, Neillg. Thanks for sharing Peace

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Chinedu Dike 08 November 2014

A lovely romantic poem well articulated and subtly penned to capture, the happiness and bliss of love felt in the inner recesses of the heart. Very nice indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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