I Wish I Could Poem by Romeo Della Valle

we all need to make mistakes, so when we do get it right we know it's right. A great poem.

True Love is as much a fairytale as real. It's of both of what we dream of having. And when we have it sometimes we don't even know we do. A surreal feeling is that of true love. Just the words coming out of my mouth bring a feeling of happiness I have yet to feel. I think at one time I was their. But now its gone and I have nothing to which it compares. Some say your lucky if you even find it once. Going after seconds odds become astronomical of finding it yet again. Yet I continue the search knowing I might meet the futility of it. But I can't know what is in vain and what is not. So regardless I will always give this all I got. Some say it is certain but is it even after death. A loss of someone so young. A life so precious suddenly gone before you even get to experience its full potential. My question is how does grief effect true love?

only one comment - i love you truly, may god bless u with sound health, with heartiest regards

only one comment - i love you truly, may god bless you with sound health with heartiest regards

Heart warming words! Your poem suggests that there is someone who feels for everyone.Beautiful poem!

I wish I could open the valves of my heart And let the loveI harbor pour freely out And cleanse those wounds What an amazing poem what a breathtaking words!

Some good thoughts in this one. Read mine - Saturday Morning Mood - Adeline

I wish i could find the words to praise this poem...

This is a wonderful poem, the words dance so naturally with each other and create a lovely harmony. Good write and so true. My favorite lines But, I do not wish to undo what I have done Because from mistakes made I have also grown And struggled for wisdom that is essential To capacity for higher potential... Thank yo for sharing, ~Besa

nurture your gift, your writing is beautiful: D