Mrs. Cynosure

Rookie (May 17 1987 / Junction City Oregon)

I wish I was a Donut


I wish I was a donut,
And got eaten everyday.
I could stick on someone’s fingers,
Squishy testy like cookie dough,
In a most delightful way,
So they wouldn’t mind.

I wish I was a donut,
Sugar coated just for fun,
To slide into your mouth, down your throat, and into your tummy.
I’m so tasty everyone would like me.
Pass me around or share me with your pale.


I wish I was a donut,
Filled with yummy cream,
I am sure you’ll enjoy me,
All you’ll hear is the sound of sucking me down,
Licking your lips and wanting more of me.
I’d be in the spot light,
The star of the show.

I wish I was a donut,
Deliciousness will fill your mouth,
And your taste buds will enter a moist smooth dream world,
After the first taste of me.

I would be candy to a cop,
And a surgery treat to a child.

I wish I was a donut,
Don’t you?

Submitted: Sunday, February 08, 2009

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Comments about this poem (I wish I was a Donut by Mrs. Cynosure )

  • Rookie Aijaz Asif (2/14/2009 1:13:00 AM)

    lol...very lovely write indeed which water'd my mouth, I wonder what donut it wouuld be; p....i like the way of your writting different, anyways thanks 10
    rgds
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  • Rookie - 0 Points Viola Grey (2/8/2009 11:33:00 PM)

    haha....is this why you are so sweet...I have to admit, I don't eat donuts, so you are safe with me around...sometimes ;) ....this is a neat one Becca. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pratisha Karki (2/8/2009 10:19:00 PM)

    Wou! Hats off to you your great poem and a great imagination. Yes, after reading this I wish to be a Donut too. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Stacey Watts (2/8/2009 10:16:00 PM)

    Gee what do I want to be when I grow up? I never thought of ever a donut. Quite an fun imagination you have.
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