I wish that favours were returned by aden wilkes

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I wish that favours were returned

I open doors for them,
they slam them in my face,
sometimes i get angry,
but allways open door .........
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aden wilkes

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DEAD PLEASURES (11/1/2008 5:01:00 PM)
Wow.
I loved this.
I dunno.
Its weirdly superb
=]
D.P
x

Delilah Miller (5/25/2008 8:29:00 PM)
I don't know why pple get so shocked when young pple show talent and insight in their writing like you have. I'm always doing thankless favors, I know just what you mean. Lovely poem, Aden.

X's and O's

Trade Martin (5/4/2008 12:10:00 AM)
Aden, you have good writing talent. Keep up the fine work....! ! ! Regards, Trade.

Rajaram Ramachandran (5/1/2008 9:13:00 PM)
Such discourteous behaviour of others do disturb young minds-a short and impressive poem.

Jerry Abrahamson (5/1/2008 11:07:00 AM)
Good poem. You express how we all feel. Keep writing. You're doing great.

Yoonoos Peerbocus (4/30/2008 2:13:00 AM)
deep poetic assets fine to ponder on