Icing On The Cake Poem by Austin Warwick

Icing On The Cake

Rating: 5.0


You being fake
was icing on the cake.
A cake filled with poison.
Frosted with lies and heartbreak.
I thought it would be sweet,
but it was bitter and hard to eat
You being evil
was icing on the cake.

Monday, January 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: cake,heartbreak
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i compared cake to a horrible break-up
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 08 January 2016

Unique comparison, it works well! I like it! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Austin Warwick

Austin Warwick

Montgomery Alabama
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