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Crashing into icy waves,
as I swim through your veins.
Each frigid beat reminds me,
I'll never wash away these stains.
The ebb and flow I meet here
are certainly doing their part.
They might just convince me
that you still have a heart.
Blessed are the heartless,
Heart-broken they'll never be.
But I keep swimming hopeful
that there's still hope for me.
Roshni D'Souza
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Sunday, May 24, 2009 |
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Friday, May 29, 2009 |
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Comments about this poem (Icy Waves
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Roshni D'Souza
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Nikunj Sharma (8/17/2009 5:00:00 AM)
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broken hearts are better
as they have seen tatter
for they know what lost love is
for that matter, what love could be
they dont swim in hope
through eternal darkness they grope
in search of light, and sun rays bright
so have a heart, no matter how broken
keep it with you, as love's token
your poem is marvellous..............it gives roshni to everyone
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Sameer Ahmed (6/7/2009 8:00:00 AM)
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A very wonderful poem with a very strong message of
continuous struggle and effort in acquiring anyting. Hope
never dies indeed.......10
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Shashendra Amalshan (5/28/2009 9:19:00 AM)
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i came to this site as some wretched old dying person..but now I feel I m bit alive though..cause I v found some good friends in such a short time
'But I keep swimming hopeful
that there's still hope for me'
and I try to swimm too..but when I see the heavy waves that's gona crash in to me I feel bit bad...feel afraid.....anyway thanks ma'am for the words of inspiration
10++
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Catrina Heart (5/24/2009 10:40:00 PM)
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fabulous written composition in a couplets form.............10+++
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (5/24/2009 10:18:00 PM)
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a pinching love poem sweetly written, where the writer's skill is manifest. shan mark 10
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