Identity Poem by cody passey

Identity

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My name is low
My sight is dim
My feet are cold
My neck is thin

An oddity
Or so it seems to me
So trivial it is
To care at all

That I am i
That i am low
That low is i
Yes low is i

Well arnt ya special
Well arnt ya bright
To sing your song
Oh day and night

One thing I know
Im not the best
No not at all
Its what I know best


My fingers reach for
No point my mind sees

I reach for the inside
Thats all I need


My name is low
No colour can i see
No black no white
But grey as it seems

My name is low
I need not your pettty tricks

My name is low
I am untouchable

Oo its a miracle
Truly unbreakable
Ive never felt what Ive heard about

Can you imagine
What love is like
Does such emotion
Stay your whole life

Cause when it comes
I know for sure
I hope it stays
To make me happy
Today : -)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cosmic Dreamer 26 October 2010

Love is the answer to all of lifes questions... I enjoyed reading this one.

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Cory Jensen 15 January 2009

This..sorta of reminds of Silverstien..and all his writings for some odd reason.......this is good. :) ♥ ♥

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Brenda Arroyo 14 January 2009

I love this... Love is a crazy thing : ] My favorite lines: 'That I am i That i am low That low is i Yes low is i'

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