Please... Poem by cody passey

Please...

Rating: 5.0


Inside each tear
I shed tonight
Resides emotion
Unwavering and bright

As emotion ever grows
Its aura overthrows

The balace of sorrow and joy in my heart
And then, no matter how well i played my part

If you do not love me
As i do you
Then love will be nothing more
Than just me
And just you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cosmic Dreamer 25 October 2010

For me this is your best poem so far... Keep up the good work...

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Cory Jensen 15 January 2009

I agree......I simply love your poems. Each of them are unique in their own way...ands thats what all poets want to have.

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Assorted Thoughts 04 January 2009

This is uniquely beautiful.

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a sensible request and lovely poem, i enjoyed the style particularly and the rhyme, excellent Cody 10 :)

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