Jon Evans

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Identity - The Bully - Poem by Jon Evans

They all try to look the same
all try to give themselves a name
pick on the boy who is all alone
just because his identity is his own
what has this world come to?
all this wrong that people do
just for the image they want to show
down the evil path they seem to go

The next person you go to hurt
or try to make feel like dirt
instead of trying to look cool
feel for the guy you make look a fool

A cool identity isn't a need
let those you bully be freed
Your identity should be your own
A better person you will be known.


Comments about Identity - The Bully by Jon Evans

  • Rookie Anon Girl (6/23/2011 10:45:00 PM)

    This poem is amazing. I was a victim of bullying but I survived. I now go to a different school and have a happy life. But the bullies still haunt me, especially in my sleep. I wish the bullies could see this wonderful poem; It would teach them a valuble lesson. Thank you for sharing this poem :) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Rachel Blank (3/9/2009 7:09:00 PM)

    This poem is a great life lesson for all....do not let others control you into becoming 'one of them.' Be an individual, be yourself! And live for Your beliefs, not what everyone else wants you to be. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rashidah Rahman (1/21/2009 11:25:00 PM)

    wow.this is an amazing poetry.really reflects on real life.its great.keep on writing! ! this is a masterpiece (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Iveta Petrova (12/23/2008 2:44:00 PM)

    i love the way this poem is written
    it really got me thinking
    i really like the way the words flow
    well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points 9 1 (12/5/2008 7:51:00 PM)

    I like it a lot, but I think it might be better, 'Image - The Bully, ' instead of Identity, if you know what I mean. Because identity isn't really the bully, but whatever... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~ Jon London ~ (5/7/2008 1:20:00 PM)

    Great poem, you should be in front of thousands of teens reading this amazing write...this is truly remarkable in every sense...10/10 from me.


    best wishes
    Jon (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Gonzalez (5/6/2008 8:32:00 PM)

    wow this is so true more teenagers should read this and realize how true it is. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 20, 2008



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