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If I Were You

If I were you
I should rain
Everyday
Every moment
I should share my love
With the thirsty land
Who is going to go on a fast
Again and again
If I were you

(2008/1/5)

Submitted: Saturday, January 05, 2008
Edited: Monday, August 04, 2008

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  • Habib Abodunrin Zakari (3/12/2009 5:59:00 AM)

    this is also another poem you should publish, but the first two lines should read

    If I were you
    I would rain

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  • Linda Weischedel (1/25/2008 1:27:00 PM)

    Lovely poem for sure! ! ! !

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  • ... ... (1/5/2008 5:29:00 PM)

    Well written, beautiful. Thanks for sharing your precious talent.

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  • Ewigi Liebe (1/5/2008 1:03:00 PM)

    wonderfully said...but sometimes was^nt easy at all..well you got point of you...if you were me...you will share what gods wanted you to share! good one

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