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If Tomorrow Never Comes

To see you
I come around
You see me
All year round
Nightingale
Says to rose
The affection
Butterfly shows
How much
You mean to me
I didn’t tell
To a good degree
I make a promise
Right away
To wont lose
The coming day
Against my cheeks
Rain drums
If tomorrow
Never comes

(2008/10/31)

Submitted: Friday, October 31, 2008
Edited: Friday, December 05, 2008

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  • T S (3/16/2009 3:43:00 AM)

    A very enjoyable read
    10 plus

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  • Reihaneh Jalalian (11/14/2008 2:27:00 PM)

    beautiful. it was really great.

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  • Thad Wilk (11/12/2008 7:22:00 PM)

    Wonderfully depicted, solid penning my friend, right from the heart!
    Best wishes! 10
    Friend Thad

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  • Reshma Ramesh (11/3/2008 8:49:00 AM)

    this is a beautiful poem.......well penned

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  • Maryam Tootazehi (11/3/2008 6:24:00 AM)

    Thank you for your comment.
    I also read your lovely poems and they were great =)
    Keep up the good work..

    Moafagh Bashi,
    Maryam

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  • Kathy Langlois (11/2/2008 10:13:00 PM)

    this poem is well written and the words are so very true, no one is promised tomorrow so we should always live each second to the fullest and let those who mean every thing to us how much we love them.so beautiful.

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  • Thad Wilk (11/1/2008 11:06:00 PM)

    A touching poem of love. Splendid read!
    Best wishes! 10
    Friend Thad

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  • Seema Chowdhury (11/1/2008 9:36:00 PM)

    yes i agree whatever we want to say we must do it today, we never know tomorrow might not come..... very good topic to write about.
    thanks, take care

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  • Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (11/1/2008 4:16:00 PM)

    Carpe Diem--seize the day.Your poemis very wistful but you appreciated the moment at the time.Wonderful sentiment.I gave you a ten.

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  • Bobbie Mcnay (10/31/2008 12:02:00 PM)

    that was great i really liked it

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