If It's For The Vows,It's Just A Prison- Dizain Poem Poem by Cynthia Buhain-baello

If It's For The Vows,It's Just A Prison- Dizain Poem



You want to leave,no words are left to say.
Letting go is hard but I must move on.
A river of tears cannot make you stay.
If it's for the vows,it's just a prison.
A breath of freedom is enough reason
For goodbyes to be said,to heal our hearts.
Pain may torment but in time it departs,
Scars don't hurt, they're what lessons are about.
Just don't step on shards of my broken heart,
When you close that door and as you go out

Copyright © Cynthia Buhain-Baello~~~02.15.19

Dizain poem -10 lines/ 10 syllables per line,
rhyme schemeababbccdcd.

If It's For The Vows,It's Just A Prison- Dizain Poem
Friday, February 15, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life,pain,recovery from
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
ISBAH 27 December 2019

HIDDEN MEANING IN THIS POEM IS PLAGIARISM

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 28 December 2019

ISBAH your comment has been reported. Do not make accusations without evidence,

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mariam bajwa 09 November 2019

This poem is having two meanings one is the apparant like if the firend leaves and hurts then there is no place for the people who betray you. But the hidden meaning is that copying others work is not less than hurting.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 16 February 2019

Beautifully designed Dizain poem, Mommy Cynthia....10+++++

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mariam bajwa 09 November 2019

I agree with your point of view

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Cynthia Buhain-baello

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Manila, Philippines
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