If my mind has fragrance
i shall find you in the fragrance.
I shall sense you and hug your smell.
I shall breathe in, your fragrance
that will penetrate my cells.
My cells shall then, bring me into prayer
and make me fall in adoration.
Very nice poem...'a breath of fresh air' as it heightens the senses! ! Great use of metaphor, paradox and alliteration! Love this poem of prayerful meditation! ! A 10, no doubt! ! ; -)
Mind blowing piece highlighting a distinctive yet unique way of adoration.I enjoy your poetry! ! Keep it up.
Divinity of soul in sincere prayer adorable drop, thanks poet
I have always dreamed to write like the way yours... Your a wonderful poet who really an inspiration for someone like me who is so young into This world I have choosen. I really like your poems.
Pure fragrance like incense sticks which enhances the mind and brings forth the spiritual side of the nature. That's what this poem is. Beautiful and pure. keep sharing your beautiful thoughts.10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very nice...this short poem heightens the senses of smell and touch in a powerful way! I shall find you in the fragrance. I shall sense you and hug your smell - great use of metaphor, paradox and alliteration! ! Love this poem! ; -)