Parwin Jadan

Rookie (2,11 sunday,1990 / happy pampero)

If You Don'T Come! - Poem by Parwin Jadan

if you don't come my life will stop
and i will die very slowly
i will melt like a candle
oh my love
i will wait and stay up late
never sleep
waiting for you
under a waterfall of chilly rain
under a black sky
and thunders will talk to me
me all alone
cold and dead...


Comments about If You Don'T Come! by Parwin Jadan

  • Rookie - -1 Points Ivan Donn Carswell (1/2/2009 11:21:00 PM)

    Parwin, I am impressed, you write with great maturity but express your emotions like a young man let free... Regards, Ivan (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 29 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (12/31/2008 4:04:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem.....flows like a song. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 31, 2008



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