If You Ever Remember Poem by Romeo Della Valle

If You Ever Remember

Rating: 5.0


If you ever remember
That I was the first
To love you with great passion...

If you ever remember
That I cried so many times
Whenever I saw you going away...

If you ever remember
That I only offered you
Just possible things...

If you ever remember
Not what I had, but
What I was and still am...

If ever remember
That in life's pathway
I have placed my hope only on you...

If you ever remember
The many times I explored
Your softened body with my hands...

Then...
You shall know that
Nobody has taken your place
Within my now tormented heart...


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Besa Dede 26 March 2012

Such a lovely, heart-aching poem. I like the way you have constructed the plot, and how the poem flows smoothly in a format of a free verse poetry. If you have read mine 'Coz' I've got the blues for you'. I believe we narrate the same story :)) ~Besa

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