Illusory World And Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Illusory World And

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Illusory world and
Monday,24th May 2021

This is an illusory world
where sufferings are untold
the hardship is unbearable
and the path is full of struggle

an average person wants to live in peace
and spends time with an ease
but what about his ideals?
he tries to make it real

even though his means are limited
he has restricted
his ambition or desire
and admires others as a role model

for him, the character is strong
and stands for no wrong
he picks up the thread
and reads it from the positive angle

he is no fool
but he wants to be happy and successful
he has an open sky
with vast earth to live and try

Dr Hasmukh Mehta
D.Litt, Folt

Illusory World And
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
he is no fool but he wants to be happy and successful he has an open sky with vast earth to live and try Dr Hasmukh Mehta D.Litt, Folt
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Dear Hasmukh sir, It was such a pleasure to get an opportunity to read your lines on a stormy morning welcoming the troublesome hours of the day ahead. The theme is really well communicated. As I read the lines again and again,

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It's always tough for a common man to live in illusory world and achieve goals. A very nice poem, depicting all the difficulties of a person to achieve his goal, Hasmukhjee... Padma, Hyderabad, May 26,2021

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Sir, truly inspired by your tenacity of writing, which itself is an accomplishment to dream about. Grateful towards your kind acceptance of my words. Pray for your blessings! Wish you good health and spirit so that your poetic fountain never runs out of verses. Raja Dutta, Kolkata, May 26,2021

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hasmukh mehta..So far wrote about 26700 poems. I feel delighted when someone reads it. Thank you foe encouraging Hasmukh Mehta hasmukh mehta, ahmedabad, May 26,2021

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hasmukh mehta...Your words have made my day. normally I don't react but reply with another poem i encourage newcomers and young poets. I write and write with the sole intention of keeping the spirit alive

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if it has been allowed to develop along the illusion of rhymes only to have let it stumble upon a 'live' and probably give up against the 'try'. Stay safe sir. Best regards

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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