Illusory world and
Monday,24th May 2021
This is an illusory world
where sufferings are untold
the hardship is unbearable
and the path is full of struggle
an average person wants to live in peace
and spends time with an ease
but what about his ideals?
he tries to make it real
even though his means are limited
he has restricted
his ambition or desire
and admires others as a role model
for him, the character is strong
and stands for no wrong
he picks up the thread
and reads it from the positive angle
he is no fool
but he wants to be happy and successful
he has an open sky
with vast earth to live and try
Dr Hasmukh Mehta
D.Litt, Folt
It's always tough for a common man to live in illusory world and achieve goals. A very nice poem, depicting all the difficulties of a person to achieve his goal, Hasmukhjee... Padma, Hyderabad, May 26,2021
Sir, truly inspired by your tenacity of writing, which itself is an accomplishment to dream about. Grateful towards your kind acceptance of my words. Pray for your blessings! Wish you good health and spirit so that your poetic fountain never runs out of verses. Raja Dutta, Kolkata, May 26,2021
hasmukh mehta..So far wrote about 26700 poems. I feel delighted when someone reads it. Thank you foe encouraging Hasmukh Mehta hasmukh mehta, ahmedabad, May 26,2021
hasmukh mehta...Your words have made my day. normally I don't react but reply with another poem i encourage newcomers and young poets. I write and write with the sole intention of keeping the spirit alive
if it has been allowed to develop along the illusion of rhymes only to have let it stumble upon a 'live' and probably give up against the 'try'. Stay safe sir. Best regards
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Dear Hasmukh sir, It was such a pleasure to get an opportunity to read your lines on a stormy morning welcoming the troublesome hours of the day ahead. The theme is really well communicated. As I read the lines again and again,