Im Done =[ Poem by diana teo

Im Done =[



I'M LOST ALONE
WITH A BROKEN HEART
WHY DO I LIVE FOR?
IS IT FOR LOVE OR SURFER?
I'M TIRED OF BEING IN PAIN
WHAT IS LOVE?
IS IT TO BE HAPPY EVERYDAY OR TO CRY EVERY TIME SOMEONE HURTS U
LOVE HURTS MORE THAN HATE
WORDS ARE MORE PAINFUL THAN HITS
WAT EM I DOING IN THE WORLD?
WHEN DOES MY LIFE END?
DO I SUPPOSES TO KILL MYSELF TO END IT?
SO MANY QUESTIONS WITHNO ANSWERS
I NEED ANSWERS........
I CAN'T TAKE LIFE ANYMORE
I JUST......JUST WANT TO DIE! ! ! !
WHATEVER LIFE SUPPOSE TO BE FOR ME
IT'S GOING TO BE OVER
NO FUTURE, NO HOPE, I'M DONE
I'LL DIE AS A TEENAGE GIRL FOREVER
IM SORRY, GOODBYE

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raymond Valadez 23 November 2009

i love this one. so much pain.. i cant read your words when all i can see is your emotions flowing out out of your heart. thats when you know you have something special when you forget you are reading and just feel. very cooo. keep writing

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Justin Unanue 24 June 2009

Very emotional. However, if I may, I suggest not capatlizing every word and Instead capitilize words that mean a lot to you. For example: The bird was Death. And it flew on Angelic wings.

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