Marley Magic


Im-Mortal - Poem by Marley Magic

Dead and rotting like man
Immortal I am
An Eagles eye as far as i can see
destroyed by the masses
immortal to be

A sea of pain flushes over me
a nervous breakdown in me
The knowing of what to say
and the sun's rays
play two roles in my amends

Above a sea of fire and chaos
pain the only sound
my halo falls
falls to the ground

Dead and rotting like man
Immortal I am
The eagles eye can see farther than me
destroyed by masses
Immortal to be

And fire will rain and fill the sea
fire will rain...
reign over me
My skin feels like a suit
rip out my tongue
Making me mute

This fire is my master
making me see like a boy
a crippling disaster
No drug can numb this pain
no faith can break this grasp
but immortal i am.

dead and rotting like man
Immortal I am
Blinded at last
overpowered by fire
i cant...

The truth is, i am-Mortal


Comments about Im-Mortal by Marley Magic

  • Rookie - 34 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (1/21/2010 12:34:00 AM)

    The title is very meaningful and the last punch line of the poem turns it up side down. I liked the poem, Marley.
    Best Wishes.

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  • Rookie dark skies covering me in darkness (1/20/2010 11:58:00 AM)

    DUDE this rules its so dark yet personal and it shows ur dark side man it kicks major butt i like it man (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 30, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 6, 2009


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