Black Poem by Melissa Koeman

Black

Rating: 4.6


Black, a colour
Black, like ink
Black, how I’m dressed
Black, makes the soul forget
Black, makes the heart feel dead
Black, the way I feel on the inside
Black, a state of mind

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Georgios Venetopoulos 15 February 2013

Despite the simplicity of your write and the repetition of the word black (a form I do not approve of) , the content is interesting and attractive.

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Joshua Fegley 21 October 2006

Yes...me too. Later...Joshua.

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Melissa Koeman

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