Imminence Of Irrelevance Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Imminence Of Irrelevance

Rating: 5.0


When darkness unveiled,
sigh slithers across the thin corridor of will
and all blurtd blues sadulous shimmer
over the dew -thrust dusts with thrumming silence
that encores the tunes of love infallible
like glazing tears dazzling over the lips of dusk.

that may reasons out of attrition in jittering stance
and the knackering thoughts inextricable smacks of myth
that slumps over the will mystified.
all the queries eclectic searching the soul deep & infinite
ruefully lodge over the distraught detracting.

when we search the love in baited breath in redolence
one may finds its way out of imminence of irrelevance
refusing all my gestures embarking upon milieu time-tossed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 09 June 2009

''that encores the tunes of love infallibble like glazing tears dazzling over the lips of dusk.'' a really poem where the cognitive metaphors of love build a ''bridge'' between the happiness and unhappiness...a little 10++ for a great poem..

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Elysabeth Faslund 22 July 2007

The assonance and consonance of this poem is smoothly soothing to the ear. The eye sees that love has never been in an irrelevant state, although said. Intriguing, Marvelous construction of lines, words. There are other things happening in this poem I just can't put a name to, yet. A reread is needed. Good. GOOD! xxElysabeth

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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