You may stop talking to me,
But don't tell me, you can stop loving me!
Can you stop picturing my face, as life transforms from its ruby-red dawn to tangerine dusk?
although the face will change every day!
I don't believe you can stop saying my name in your heart,
because for you, that name has a special meaning,
you said -
that name sends a sensation to your spine!
Sometimes you decide - you have to let me go!
Sometimes I decide - I have to let you go!
But both of us have lost the power!
How can you detach a tree from its leaves!
Moon and its beams!
Pearl and the Oyster! Banks and the River!
So don't make impossible plans -
You will keep loving me, as you do,
As long as my heart will keep beating
And not cease loving you!
Cont.2) though the child has stepped into adulthood, the pearl must be used to be traded, the moon, when it is no full moon, its beaming becomes weaker, the tree from its leaves, the leaves will meet the next stage of existence.....you see? I have enjoyed this ardent poem, brilliantly written! God´s Blessings!
Truest facts here created, an amazing poem I have read here, dear poetess! I cite here s few lines from your poem: How can you detach a tree from its leaves! Moon and its beams! Pearl and the Oyster! A Child and the Mother! ................IF I may say....when the time is ripe for it, A tree, Moon, Pearl and Child. BUT the ties that bind will STAY, ............. please see cont. Thank you.
I liked what I read, well done dear poet. ...because love is not because xyz, but despite it all.
So true! You have inspired me with your thoughtful comments! Thank you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It's impossible to write the appropriate words about such a beautiful poem. You describe inseparable love- it's impossible to separate two souls who are united In the strongest bond of life. It's one of the best love poem I ever read. Every word, every line is outstanding. Thanks for sharing.