Impossible Plans Poem by Malabika Ray Choudhury

Impossible Plans

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You may stop talking to me,
But don't tell me, you can stop loving me!
Can you stop picturing my face, as life transforms from its ruby-red dawn to tangerine dusk?
although the face will change every day!

I don't believe you can stop saying my name in your heart,
because for you, that name has a special meaning,
you said -
that name sends a sensation to your spine!

Sometimes you decide - you have to let me go!
Sometimes I decide - I have to let you go!
But both of us have lost the power!
How can you detach a tree from its leaves!
Moon and its beams!
Pearl and the Oyster! Banks and the River!


So don't make impossible plans -
You will keep loving me, as you do,
As long as my heart will keep beating
And not cease loving you!

Friday, September 13, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratan Ghosh 03 October 2019

It's impossible to write the appropriate words about such a beautiful poem. You describe inseparable love- it's impossible to separate two souls who are united In the strongest bond of life. It's one of the best love poem I ever read. Every word, every line is outstanding. Thanks for sharing.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 September 2019

Cont.2) though the child has stepped into adulthood, the pearl must be used to be traded, the moon, when it is no full moon, its beaming becomes weaker, the tree from its leaves, the leaves will meet the next stage of existence.....you see? I have enjoyed this ardent poem, brilliantly written! God´s Blessings!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 24 September 2019

Truest facts here created, an amazing poem I have read here, dear poetess! I cite here s few lines from your poem: How can you detach a tree from its leaves! Moon and its beams! Pearl and the Oyster! A Child and the Mother! ................IF I may say....when the time is ripe for it, A tree, Moon, Pearl and Child. BUT the ties that bind will STAY, ............. please see cont. Thank you.

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Aniruddha Pathak 14 September 2019

I liked what I read, well done dear poet. ...because love is not because xyz, but despite it all.

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 14 September 2019

So true! You have inspired me with your thoughtful comments! Thank you.

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