Rema Prasanaa

! In Between - Poem by Rema Prasanaa

From widening silence
and words, a soul
would like to depart
by its own and not
wishes to be erased
over compression
word for sure does not
want to harm any
further, wishes to step back
by its own and truth
endures all tribulations..
allow a fragment
of earth for a word
to scribble
a few lines before
it reaches heaven

Comments about ! In Between by Rema Prasanaa

  • Rookie Sarwar Chowdhury (9/8/2008 7:05:00 AM)

    Ammmmmmmmmazing! ..........10 (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Raj Nandy (9/8/2008 2:46:00 AM)

    A beauty of a poem! I had written a poem with the same title once, but this one far excells!
    -Raj Nandy (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 274 Points Kesav Easwaran (9/3/2008 12:32:00 AM)

    good poetry in the real sense...words sad bitterly expressive fit rhythmic well into lines...a quality write, Rema 10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 96 Points Vidyadhara ..... (9/2/2008 11:52:00 AM)

    I have no words.........
    Beautiful composition (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,412 Points Indira Renganathan (8/26/2008 10:10:00 AM)

    somber verses of a truth..well done in simple style..superb (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tapas Baidya (8/26/2008 1:33:00 AM)

    Excellant! Truth lolerates many hazards but it survives in the widen space of unuttered words of poetries. Please read my poems if time permits. Thanks a lot.

    Tapas Baidya, Kolkata. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 26, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 26, 2008

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