~ In Euphonic Yo-Yo ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
21 September 2010
Sorrows are hollow
Why mop n’ swallow
Why yell ouch ow?
Erase n’ eschew
Muffle fuddle foe woe
Low n’ lull all low
Sow n’ souse marrow.
In Euphonic Yo-Yo
Explore inner éclat El Dorado
Immix in melody mellow
Gleam n’ glow n’ wallow
In bedecked minstrel Yoo Hoo
Dance douse with Divine Billow.
Zoom n’ yep n’ uh-huh with ~
Ooh Yo!
Wreath Wow! !
Ye Jane Joe! ! !
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Glossary with humility I’m giving what I tried to express.:
[1] Marrow ~ Most vital part of some idea..
[2] Wallow [Verb] ~ Be ecstatic with joy.
[3] Yoo Hoo ~ Gain someone's attention.
[4] Ooh [Verb] ~ Express admiration and pleasure.
[5] Yo ~. An informal address to one whose name is not known to another [Hi, Hey]
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Very good message for modern world Where we're swallowed by tension...hedonistic society propelling us for never ending more Max of 10+ I voted for Carry on Ms. Niv to enlighten us with your poetic feelings
Piece with a prescription [psychic counsellings] who are in Global Depression... '...Gleam n’ glow n’ wallow In bedecked minstrel Yoo Hoo Dance douse with Divine Billow....' ~ This the benchmark of this poem for antidoting depression In these days we rarely get broad smile only measured and after thought smile....spontaneity missing Feel the wallow in Divine Billow...great line I'm sorry I missed this beautiful poem..also I'm dismayed by handful of comments...great 10++
nice emotions reflected through this poem. thanks for sharing.
Nicely penned poem here! I can definitely feel the emotion here! Keep writing poetry!
It's a roller coaster ride, great rythym and rhyme. It was so easy to read it was almost like there was music built in to it. Great write.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
hi Niv, i wish it was so easy to swallow the pain and sorrow.