~ In Sunglass ~ Shoeing ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
21 August 2010
Biblios ~ Banging
Visuals ~ Hanging.
Imageries ~ Gasping
Concepts ~ Hibernating.
Calories ~ Burning
Poetries ~ Nictating.
Shame ~ Shining
Conscience ~ Caricaturing.
Poets ~ Bibbing
Readers ~ Inebriating.
Eyes ~ Bilking
In Sunglass ~ Shoeing.
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A bewildering poetry... Definitely a differnt shade of poetic mind... I'm sure many poets have such feeling in some time... '...Eyes ~ Bilking/In Sunglass ~ Shoeing.'...here it climaxed.. Wow Sunglass shoeing...very aptly juxta posed... 10++
Very interesting. Lovely summertime feel...like losing ourselves at the beach, only, it's in poetry. Fascinating perspective. The vocabulary wasn't easily comprehensible, but it was enjoyable.
You have shortlisted a few punches to make out a good poem. Keep it up.
Interesting poem but nicely done Thanks for sharing with me
I love the way you force the reader to think about what you are saying in your poem....... brilliantly put together....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
niv your up and flying with this spectacular