In My Dreams Poem by Eden Orbista

In My Dreams

Rating: 4.8


I want a simple life with you
And i won't ask for anything more
You're all i need and a life ahead with you
To love you, to cherish you and to care for you!

Always remember that i love you
And that's a promise forever
I'll sleep with you..........in my thoughts
Tonight, ....because, there's only you.

Random thoughts ran in my head
After a long and difficult day
But believe me, there never has been a moment
That you are out of my mind!

Our life ahead will be pink and fruitful
We will always be young and in bloom
I love to envision us in a tight embrace
When the final moment comes.......how lovely that would be!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Thinking of you.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 09 February 2017

Sweet and lovely poem... Reminds me of the song with the same title popularized by REO SPEEDWAGON... congrats on being selected for the day... I give you a perfect 10.... Nasa Labo, Camarines Norte ako last year. Nakarating din ako sa Daet..... What a beautiful province....

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Eden Panotes Orbista 17 February 2020

Thank you Bernard, my pleasure, you're a great poet too.

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 09 February 2017

A beautiful love poem Eden.Congratulations on being member of the day. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Richard Wlodarski 09 February 2017

We will always be young and in bloom. Love that line. The simplicity of the poem makes it sound like young love. However, there is a lot more to it than meets the eye. Congratulations on Poem Of The Day!

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Oh Thanks somuch Richard Wlodarski.

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 December 2020

I want a simple life with you And i won't ask for anything more You're all i need and a life ahead with you To love you, to cherish you and to care for you! love is the greatest need of a human being. your simplicity is praiseworthy. tony

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Eden Panotes Orbista 18 May 2018

OH please ignore my first note earlier, It should be, this poem was featured as Poem of the Day.

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Eden Panotes Orbista 18 May 2018

This poem was featured as Poem of the Month here.

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Eden Panotes Orbista 12 March 2017

Thank you sooo much my dear colleague, my dear Poets for voting for my poem to be the poem of the day! Richard Wlodarski, Siddartha Montik, Kevin Patrick, Christina Simmons, Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black, Gladys Brown Prince, Unnikrishnan E S, Jayatissa K. Liyanage, Edward Kofi Louis, Indira Renganathan, Clarence Prince, Anil Kumar Panda, Tom Allport, Lucas Cousin Tuka, Linet Sabastian, Col Muhamad Khalid Khan, thank you sooooo much

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Eden Panotes Orbista 03 March 2017

Thank you sooo much my dear colleague, my dear Poets for voting for my poem to be the poem of the day!

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