I know that if i walked this earth,
a thousand years or more,
I'd never feel this strange rebirth
Thats felt in your rapport ,
To touch the stars, I hold you close
to feel your breath with mine
And hold you in the afterglow
Forever, , , ,
....... in my time.
and those few lines are all it takes to light a fire in the soul...wonderful write Laurie...loved it.
oh wow Laurie, if this is a new poem, you're getting better & better!
Beautiful as usual Laurie. a gem of a poem with a huge heart. Kind regards Ann
She's so lucky...this is very sweet and beautiful! thanks for sharing my friend :)
All I'd really like to say is 'exquisite', but the computer demands more than 20 words.
Simply romantic and beautiful. 'and hold you in the afterglow forever.......in my time! sigh! 10 Karin Anderson
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wonderful gentle write Laurie...10++