In Sleep Poem by Laurie hill

In Sleep

Rating: 5.0


In the silver stars of evening, I see your shining tears,
in the summer breeze, i hear your lonely sighs,
In the softly falling rain, I feel your touch upon my skin,
in sleep i feel your kiss upon my eyes......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Sighs, tears, skin and eyes are all sumptuous rhymes. The kiss of the eyes is the perfect touch for a romantic night in. Just beautiful (sigh!) 10 love Karin

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Smiley Hooker 18 September 2009

Cute, my friend....sweet dreams :)

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Sonya Florentino 17 September 2009

love this 'little' poem Laurie....' in sleep i feel your kiss upon my eyes'...... that last line was exquisite! .....no more nightmares, only sweet dreams....yes, as Patti says, it's a lullabye (and not only for a child) .....

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Patti Masterman 17 September 2009

I think this is so quietly beautiful. Thanks, it's my favorite new lullaby..(smile)

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