lovely raymond


In One Night - Poem by lovely raymond

In one night, my fantasy dream come true.
Between me and you.

In one night, you gave me romance.

In one night, I can feel the fire immense.

In one night, you express your emotion

With such a deep passion.

In one night, I can’t deny how I feel.

In one night, you show me your love is real.

In one night, you made me feel complete.

In one night, intensity builds up inside of me.

In one night, I lost my senses.

In one night, I can hardly breathe.

In one night, I went to heaven.

In one night, my dreams come true between me and you.


Comments about In One Night by lovely raymond

  • Rookie Honest Heart (5/2/2009 5:45:00 AM)

    That was an amazing poem.
    I really liked it the way it went and flowed...great job sweety....Well written :) :) :) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Lovely Raymond (4/28/2009 8:24:00 AM)

    please if u got time leave a comment to let me me know wat u think.thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Sandra Martyres (4/28/2009 8:23:00 AM)

    A memorable night indeed for you Lovely - nice write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 188 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (4/28/2009 8:10:00 AM)

    In one night.. you had some funn, didn't you? ? nice. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 26, 2009



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