hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 43,772 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

In Open - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Honesty certainly pays
It makes you fearless
Injects idea of stubbornness
Strong will power to remain in race

What makes man perfect?
In his act
Dealing with other people
And helping them in struggle

This trend appears in open
With knowledge of no support even
People try to look forward with faith
Believe in capacity and heave a sigh of breath

Yes all these matters in real situation
You are going ahead with its continuation
Not much of economic support is needed
Only people’s faith and trust is always heeded

It may cause you little hardship
Yet it is not the painful weep
That mars your struggle and fight
People are staving but believes you as right person

If you have earned such repute
Believe me there can be no dispute
Your way is lightened by good will
That shall never dim and remain still


Comments about In Open by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 43,772 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/10/2014 8:40:00 PM)

    Shujat Ahmad likes this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Gold Star - 43,772 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/9/2014 10:10:00 PM)

    I think it has a very enlightening point of view. Good will is the best path to take at all cost!

    Danny Ocean6 minutes ago
    I like the smoothness of his approach! I like the smoothness of his approach! He explains clearly his point of view. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 43,772 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/9/2014 10:10:00 PM)

    Awesome

    Travis Kelly10 minutes ago
    Loved it! :)
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  • Gold Star - 43,772 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/9/2014 10:10:00 PM)

    very nice


    Corinne Prado10 minutes ago
    i like the idea behind it, very true (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 43,772 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/9/2014 9:49:00 PM)

    Honesty certainly pays
    It makes you fearless (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 9, 2014

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 10, 2014


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