In Other Words - 'shut Your Gob! ' Poem by Pete Crowther

In Other Words - 'shut Your Gob! '



'Make a less noise',
my grandad used to say.
'Keep silence
in the ranks'
our old naval cox'n
hoarsely barked,
and 'Tikho, tikho, gospoda'
gently hushed our
Russian tutor, so
what was with all these guys
that they were always trying
to shut us up?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scarlett Treat 26 February 2006

My Grampy always told us, 'Children were meant to be SEEN, not HEARD.' So there. Then somewhere else I read that we spend the first year of a child's life teaching them to walk and talk, and the rest of their lives telling them to sit down and shut up! ! Can't win for losing. Maybe that's why we're poets - still trying to find our voices! ! Scarlett

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Raynette Eitel 26 February 2006

In my home (a hundred years ago or so) it is rumored that my great-grandmother used to glare at the children across the dinner table saying, 'Let thy vittles fill thy mouth!) I think your way is ever so much more colorful, Peter. This is fun. Raynette

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Linda Jenkinson 26 February 2006

consider me gob shut...soooo funny peter thank you.

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Gina Onyemaechi 26 February 2006

lol. Funny and fun. Warm regards, Gina.

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Pete Crowther

Pete Crowther

Hull, East Yorkshire, England
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