In The Blink Of An Eye Poem by susette varga

In The Blink Of An Eye

Rating: 4.9


In the blink of an eye you were gone
Too many obstacles to overcome
So many issues from women in your past
Sadly we were destined never to last
Understanding, compassion totally lost
Unwilling to be strong
Leaving the baggage from the past behind
Was the only way we could have survived

Thursday, January 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: sad love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Invisible One I Am Not Here 11 January 2018

Thank you Chinedu... so lovely of you to say xxx

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Bipasha D 12 January 2018

we do not live in an ideal world and you have well captured the realities of life...

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Alison mujati 15 January 2018

Well written keep it up... You can also read my Nerve of poetry

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Invisible One I Am Not Here 16 January 2018

Thank you Alison Mujati x

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Chinedu Dike 11 January 2018

The temperamental and whimsical nature of love are aptly captured in the poem. A well drafted piece of poetry nicely penned with insight. Thanks for sharing Susette.

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Riza Braholli 25 July 2019

Leaving the baggage from the past behind Was the only way we could have survived... beautyful! thanks my friend

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Dev Anand 11 August 2018

Unwilling to be strong Leaving the baggage from the past behind Was the only way we could have survived.....thinking about the past and reflecting to save the love and the relationship.. thank u dear poetess.. dev

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Mahtab Bangalee 05 June 2018

thoughtful saying - Sadly we were destined never to last great 10++

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Lovely lines filled with a laudable lesson! Leaving the baggage is not always easy but it is necessary for survival. Well done!

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White Tiger 08 March 2018

Sad write but smart decision. Thank you for sharing

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