In The Depths Of Darkness Poem by Aishwarya J.Menon

In The Depths Of Darkness

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In the depths of darkness
In the depths of darkness,
We'll be travelling, a pit of problems
And a pool of sorrow.
In that depth, where life is just unpleasant
And snakes of grief crawl.
Each second is depressing and you
Think that this is the end.
"I can't do this" a feeble cry
That escaped from your red lips,
With tears in your eyes and bad luck at heart
Why is it that all of us have here? ?
Feel that confidence. Feel that joy,
That you had when you took up the challenge.
The race is not yet over, success is near.
Feel your heart racing and mind shouting.
Hear my thoughts inspiring you!
"You can...only you can"
Stand up on your weak knees!
Weakness shall never count! For your will,
Is strong enough to pull you back
The point is near and you have fallen,
But just stand and move forward, let prosperity conquer you!
Let that joy return and a smile break out!
For there is always a way out,
Of the depth of darkness,
The depth of pain.
You heard me. You stood up. You moved ahead
And now you've gifted me with the sweet moment of that glorious smile,
Leaving me with the key to the mystery of the darkest pit of life,
The depth of darkness...is just outwitted!

Thursday, December 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: darkness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 26 January 2016

An insightful depiction of life at its deplorable low ebb, the need to keep one's spirit high, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. A good motivational piece of poetry bristling with knowledge. Faith keeps those that keep the faith - Mother Teresa. Thanks for sharing Aishwarya. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Ashutosh Tripathy 21 December 2015

Beautifully written.. Your words had the power to take the reader along to the depths.. And the optimistic thought that there is always a way out.. It gave a sensation that this is all dream and once you wake up it will all be over.. Bravo

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 17 December 2015

Beautiful poetic words, outwitting the depths of darkness.10+

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