Treasure Island

alireza asgari

(tehran)

In The Unknown Land


One day
I was walking
In a unknown land
Without sky
Without existence
Without your flowers
I was alone
Birds died
River died
Even
Sun set died
Just the land and me
We were watching
A mountain
Middle of colors
I left it
And went to an other place
In the darkness
In the pain
The land of blind lights
Thus
I called them
I took their hands
And
I guided them
To an other land
But
Lights left me too!
again
I became alone
Without your lips
Your kissing
Life left me
I was alone
Just the land and me
We watched dead of world
And
Saw the hearts
That fell
In the unknown land

Submitted: Wednesday, April 18, 2012
Edited: Wednesday, April 18, 2012
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  • Unwritten Soul (4/18/2012 1:21:00 PM)

    Living in the land sounds like living in the desert, desert of love and beautiful life...it really deep write but hey never feel like desert is a bad land, green it by strong hope and may you have all flowers in your hands, Keep writing this is a good poem! _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

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