In Thee I Trust Poem by persian khushi

In Thee I Trust

Rating: 5.0


Thee has created me with love,
To love.
Thou has forgiven my sins
As vast as the ocean
My only true love
In Thee I depend
For waking each morn’
My daily sustanance
To Thee I pray
Ever so humble and thankful
For my every blessing received
I kneel to Thee

Thee sent Rumi in my dreams
To show me the way
The narrow ledge I am to cross
He showed me how
Swifty without fear
Of what lies below
He showed me how to fly inThine Mercy
And truly “yaqeen” in Thee
My beloved creator
Who knows the depth of my heart

To Thee
I leave all my affairs
My every thought,
Am consumed by Thee
My heart echoes Thy name
My life in Thine hands
In Thee lies my destiny
To Thee I yearn to return
Pure of heart and soul...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cleveland Gibson 06 July 2011

I full appreciate the sentiments shown in your poem. Good thoughts. But how to take your poem and make it better? I'd suggest a line by line edits. Doing so m seem a lot of work but the final result will be worth the effort. The content you write about means your final version might turn out to be inspirational. How not to make that extra effort? Best wishes

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 05 July 2011

Wonderful poem written with great skill. The poem is rich in imagery and style. I am impressed. Well taken. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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