Infinity Poem by Sally Plumb Plumb

Infinity

Rating: 4.9


When I missed you
on a fateful day,
and my mental sustenance
was drained with misery,
I cursed the late fall sun
and cried - let darkness come.

Spin rotund flare
until you are a cinder
and winter befalls
the universe
with colder stars
and older lights,
then night will reign
for eternity across
forevers sights.

- and me an ancient lady
in timelessness unfree
will wander the spatial deserts
into infinity.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 19 February 2015

Wonderful poem, needing only a comma after the word SPIN on line seven and an apostrophe in the word FOREVER'S in line fifteen. Well done, and congratulations on having it selected as Poem of the Day!

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Unnikrishnan E S 15 August 2021

Silently violent poem. Kicking the reader 8n the heart.

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Unnikrishnan E S 15 August 2021

Wow! What a power! " the universe with colder stars and older lights, then night will reign for eternity across forevers sights. - and me an ancient lady in timelessness unfree will wander the spatial deserts"

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Sally 22 September 2022

Thankyou for your lovely remark x

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S. Wesley Mcgranor 14 February 2021

'Awesome...

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Sally P P 09 April 2021

Thankyou you very much indeed

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Tom Allport 18 April 2017

a haunting poem of what might have been? instead the wish of darkness can now be seen! ............wonderfully written.

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Sally P. P. 02 April 2019

Thankyou for your comment and interest. Sally.

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 December 2015

The spatial deserts of life. Nice work.

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Sally PP 29 April 2019

Nice to hear from you. Thanks.

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Sally Plumb Plumb

Sally Plumb Plumb

Haverhill Suffolk England
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