Longing for rest,
closing his eyes,
but now comes the test,
the retched lies,
he stays awake,
Insomnia visiting him again,
His mind leaving wreckage in it's wake
and finally he realizes the stain,
The one where his heart,
once was,
and the he wishes on dreams,
to allow him to see,
and make everything stop being not as it seems,
He wants it to be simple,
But just as He thinks of Her,
He succumbs to sleep.
Poetic Twist at the end as '...But just as He thinks of Her, /He succumbs to sleep. ' wow fantastic...tenner Regards ~ niv PS Please comment on my poem 'I Want To Be Raped' [14 words poetry]..PH banned it ultimately gave in. n
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Atticus mortimer Im beginning to like your poems