indira babbellapati

Rookie - 71 Points (visakhapatnam, india)

Insomniac Senryu(S) - Poem by indira babbellapati

insomniac nights
torturous play-field
of body and brain

insomniac wounds
fade at day light
muster strength for night

body numb
mind agitated
nagging nights

night long
ghost-shadows on brain-walls
sleeplessness reigns

dogs and frogs
wail and croak through staring nights
haunting insomnia

through the dark nights
a toothless grin flashes
sleep at hide and seek

sun light dilutes
restless nights
unique strategy!


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  • Rookie - 165 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (5/17/2012 11:18:00 AM)

    Simply amazing and enjoying..Insomniacs must mull it..in my fab poem list tenner ~ Regards ~ niv


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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 14, 2012



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