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john tiong chunghoo
(Jan 21,1960 / Sibu, Sarawak - Land with Cat City, Swan City, Oil City and the World's Largest Cave Mulu)
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  forgive
and you'll
be forgiven


john tiong chunghoo

Submitted Date :  Monday, November 17, 2008
Submitted Date :  Friday, July 16, 2010



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JOSEPH POEWHIT (11/17/2008 2:45:00 PM)
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ECCL: 3 says different but forgiving is true
Andrew mark Wilkinson (11/17/2008 2:36:00 PM)
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So True John... Andrew 10
Michael Pruchnicki (11/17/2008 1:59:00 PM)
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How can this be a haiku?

forgive = 2 syllables
and you'll = 3
be forgiven = 4

9 syllables instead of 17? No concrete image! No nature reference!

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