Intro (Excerpt From 'Untitled') Poem by Aven Black

Intro (Excerpt From 'Untitled')

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This rival of
Mindspace,
Perception,
and Fate
drives the soul,
The Touch, irate.
this mortal web, of thought
spun from the breast.
its taint lay
within The Spider -therefor Its nest.
Lo!
deny the stream,
the current may...
deny the night, itself,
from day...
lest,
see you and I
as bodies away.
In this communion:
We, the I
and
I, the We.
Cast forth, countless solid eyes and see!
Send forth, endless earthen hands and touch!
In this encompassment:
We, the I
and
I, the We.
Wherefor is it then not
that he could see
the Knot within him
like
the plot within the
Story?
'The Story? '
The story he
himself
has placed...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Natasha Dementia 23 May 2009

a well written peice

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James Mclain 04 May 2009

Lots of knots unwoven best by blade...iip..you write very well if I may say..iip

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Tai Chi Italy 03 May 2009

lol well the story has to start somewhere and it is usually with a him, or I and I making we in poetic history, I love the knot within him line so much, we do these things without even knowing the plot but the key to finishing the story is never to lose the plot... Detective Inspect her Tai, smiling at you

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Aven Black

Aven Black

Johannesburg, South Africa
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