Is This Our Song? Poem by shweta khosla

Is This Our Song?

Rating: 5.0


You and I,
Connected, separated by miles.
Thinking,
of each other with silent smiles.

You and I,
not talking about you and me.
Seeking,
desperately, other fish in the sea.

You and I,
Warmed by alcohol and sushi.
Singing,
warming up a night that’s chilly.

You and I,
and different shades of love.
Different,
asks from the one above.

You and I,
making each other laugh.
I have some,
and you have the other half.

You and I,
Looking for a song to fit.
I’m hoping,
Its timeless and a superhit!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 02 November 2008

A beautiful poem with beautiful title.Simple, rhythmic and meaningful.I really enjoyed it Shweta Khosla!

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Musical Notes 04 September 2009

It certainely is song of 'you and I'..... a very good piece indeed...! !

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Shashendra Amalshan 03 June 2009

this is a very musical super hit indeed...liked it very much...nice symphony

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that makes a lovely duet

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Shruti Suresh 10 November 2008

Very nicely structured. simple yet royal in its meaning.

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Harish K. Thakur 10 November 2008

good structured poem with sweetness of rhyme n though...

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