It Doesn'T Work With Rain Poem by Wes Thompson

It Doesn'T Work With Rain

Rating: 4.5


slowly now
it falls
from the holes
carved deep in the sky
far above me
in a spiraling motion
it seems to fill
the gaps of space that I've
determined
seperate me from
heaven

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patrick McFarland 03 February 2008

Great imagery Wes. I give it a 10.

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