hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 37,749 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

It Hurts Me More - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

I feel pain deep and harder
When you often speak about new love
It pinches heart and I shake had in disbelief

She is open and kind hearted
The bond had new developed
The relation was off he ground
I had some relief to be found

If she was to be believed
I thought “I had not really observed”
She must be unclear in mind
Why else she must try to find

I could not think for moment
She had sent shock wave at present
It was her prerogative to go for alliance
I failed to see any result or chance

It gave me another hint
Was she making another heart print?
Was she testing my jealousy?
All these days I was very much busy

I wanted now to capitalize
She was there to receive me and oblige
Why had I been so ignorant in love game?
She had really trusted me but put to shame


Comments about It Hurts Me More by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 37,749 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/19/2013 7:45:00 AM)

    Mohammad Jahoorul Islam likes this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Gold Star - 37,749 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/19/2013 7:29:00 AM)

    I feel pain deep and harder
    When you often speak about new love
    It pinches heart and I shake had in disbelief (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,749 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/19/2013 7:28:00 AM)

    testing always testing love: _)


    earth ling44 minutes ago
    thats the only way to find out
    Comment 0
    sweet (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,749 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/19/2013 7:28:00 AM)

    Geetanjali Saini51 minutes ago
    can feel the pain. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 19, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, November 19, 2013


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