It Is Raining... Poem by Vaisakh S Babu

It Is Raining...

Rating: 5.0


it is raining outside
earth is look like a bride with white gown
on her, which makes her beautiful
i 'm enjoying it through the glass window
the rain makes the windows more chilled
i touched it and i felt it
rain drops flows through the glass like the rivers
they are on a race...
the faster one sacrifices the most to become the first.
they are leading to the water valve
i asked to the drops...
'where are u going?
first dropp said i 'm going to the valley of gladness
so that i can be always happy...
second dropp said 'i 'm going to the valley of gold and jewels
so that i can be a golden dropp
the third dropp hold the silence, i again asked...
he said 'i 'm going to the valley of farmers and hard worker's
so that i can become the flesh of his life...
when heard this tears comes out from my ears...
i know that they also want to go to that valley

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 04 July 2011

Nice poem written with great skill and wisdom. The poem is rich in imagery. Well done. I rate it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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