It May Heal Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
It May Heal
You were close but far
Like sky with stars
Makes me no sad
But heart feels it bad
Not because you hate
Not because of ill fate
But some important thing to state
Love belongs to all, just wait
Neither did you lie!
Nor I tried to belie
Only you failed to see through
Love was pure and true
This took you away with little distance
It so happened only once
But mistrust takes no chance
Mirror reflects certainly the difference
It may heal
And look also real
But afford some more time
It may come to term sometimes
Love it with full confidence
So display no distance
Keep feeling as near as possible
The wrong things may certainly settle down
Aaron Mensah13 minutes ago I like the rhyming sequence
I like the idea. Danielle Timek14 minutes ago I understand what you're trying to say, and you present it with elegance, but maybe you should try to find a more steady rhythm. Don't get me wrong, it's great as is. Just trying to get some constructive criticism in! :) Comment +1 humm
Jane Lomas14 minutes ago its ok but I don't know lacks a certain wham about it in other words needs work
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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great work sir himanshu singla13 minutes ago i loved it Comment +1 Touching love poem