Neela Nath


It's Better


It's better to stay
out of sight.
It's better
to stop all fight.
It's better
to be good friend.
It's better
to see the end.
It's better,
to water our kindness.
It's better,
to lose the race.
It's better,
to hide your rage.
It's better,
to open new page.

Submitted: Thursday, May 23, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, September 10, 2013

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  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (6/26/2013 5:35:00 PM)

    Its better to be silent it's better to open a new page. true. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 175 Points Vizard Dhawan (6/11/2013 10:42:00 AM)

    great piece of work indeed
    your poems have different charming
    nice (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 267 Points David Wood (6/7/2013 1:43:00 PM)

    Every new day is an unwritten page just waiting. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (6/3/2013 6:42:00 AM)

    Whole poem is beautifully written but It's better to stay
    out of sight, , sounds a bit pessimistic view....hope you will be all right, if something hurts u. let it go, don't take it too serious...be happy...awesome poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (6/3/2013 6:42:00 AM)

    Whole poem is beautifully written but It's better to stay
    out of sight, , sounds a bit pessimistic view....hope you will be all right, if something hurts u. let it go, don't take it too serious...be happy...awesome poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,104 Points Valsa George (6/3/2013 1:51:00 AM)

    To begin all over anew with new resolutions and fresh hopes is what is required to keep life florid and sprightly! ! Enjoyed! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 168 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (6/2/2013 1:08:00 AM)

    I also don't love the lime light, so staying out of sight is ideal for me. I think that answers Jasmeen's question.
    Its not always easy starting on a new page but its the only way one can build his or her future, you forget the past and start anew, starting on a new page gives you new challenges but its worth facing them.
    Siya_! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 415 Points Yasmeen Khan (5/29/2013 1:16:00 AM)

    It's terse and easy on mind and carries an important message. But why to be out of sight? (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,030 Points Valerie Dohren (5/25/2013 4:01:00 PM)

    Wise words Hari - nice write. Have you read mine 'Better to, Rather than.....' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 206 Points R.j. Wynn (5/25/2013 12:25:00 PM)

    Amen brother Hari, don't worry, be happy. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,007 Points Unwritten Soul (5/25/2013 12:22:00 AM)

    Start new page, writing new beautiful flow in colorful glow! ! start new and it's better_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,059 Points Kanav Justa (5/25/2013 12:05:00 AM)

    says a lot, , this poem of yours, , nicely done (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,362 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (5/24/2013 11:15:00 PM)

    Nice poem let us open a page to remove the pangs of humanity (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,055 Points Thomas A Robinson (5/23/2013 10:27:00 PM)

    Pages are found in books. Open up a book to first page.
    A new beginning, a new book, a new page.
    Life comes with no book or instruction.
    In the begining the book has no name.
    The pages ard blank.We fill up the pages
    with our life's experiences. And the rest depends
    on you. (Report) Reply

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