'' It's Then We Find God '' Poem by Bri Mar

'' It's Then We Find God ''



In life the beginning,
Is the start of the end,
Don't worry about sinning,
It's all part of the trend.

By commandments we're driven,
That's what we're taught,
If you're not forgiven,
Things will get hot,

Be you man or woman,
Those sins you commit,
It is typically Human,
Just do it with wit.

We even have rules,
Which does allow killing,
Thought up by fools,
Who to fight are not willing.

It depends on your class,
How much you can steal,
If rich it's en masse,
They know how to conceal.

If poor it is true,
On you they'll lay blame,
It's you they'll pursue,
They'll make you feel shame.

From murder to lies,
When young we don't care,
Our sins one denies,
It's the truth we beware.

It's makes an impression,
On how we all live,
Just go to confession,
The creator will forgive.

As we get older,
It's not really odd,
When the conscience doth smoulder,

‘' It's Then We Find God ‘'

Monday, December 10, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: hypocrisy
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
They do say, '' IT'S NEVER TOO LATE '' for some I'd have to reply
'' YES IT IS ''
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 13 December 2018

The conscience burns us when we grow old and reflect on our sins i understand. I'm not old yet but this poem is awesome for me in rhyming and content. The deserved hard hitting lines a bit sarcastic are true to factual. Kudos. pleez do comment/review my newest poem too, titled, Dream Holiday places

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