hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 38,693 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

It Sets - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Why does shine everyday?
Comes in open each day
Shines for whole of the universe
With same kindness and force

How many lives look toward?
With only on word
"Sun god shines in our lives"
We always pray and believe

Such is our belief
To get he relief
From above the sky
We all hang on and ply

It sets too
With all energy
To come at rest
For all of us to retire in nest

Let us look at no process
We have full access
To know about unknown facts
We honor its occurrences with simple acts


Comments about It Sets by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 38,693 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/18/2014 8:42:00 PM)

    Every day I welcome the evening, and then greet the sun, yes
    18 Aug by David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost) to It sets (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 38,693 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/18/2014 11:05:00 AM)

    xEvery day I welcome the evening, and then greet the sun, yes
    2 hours ago by David Wetzel (leafsailors ghost) | Reply (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 38,693 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/18/2014 11:03:00 AM)

    good write


    Harold R Hunt Sr3 hours ago
    nice write
    Comment +1 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 38,693 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/18/2014 11:03:00 AM)

    Great Structure, Meaningful.


    Jerry Malec3 hours ago
    I found this poem to be meaningful, however others might find it a little harder to understand due to possible language barriers. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 38,693 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/18/2014 8:02:00 AM)

    Why does shine everyday?
    Comes in open each day (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 18, 2014



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