It Wasn'T Me, Apparently It Was You! Poem by SarahLouise Malone

It Wasn'T Me, Apparently It Was You!

Rating: 5.0


don't say you didn't care..
your eyes told it all
nothing we didn't share
leading to your call

love, the word you knew so well
love, the word that you lived by
love and we tripped and fell
love, into a world we couldn't deny


yet you take my heart in your hands
and squeeze and burst it til anger is in the past
us pulled on your strings, to you demands
and you crush me 'til i breath my very last

i can't breath anymore my rhyming scheme gone- who cares! where are you now, what have you done to me? my hearts plummets and all my feelings are eliminating all because...it wasn't me, apparently it was you!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Lyday 05 April 2009

Bold move breaking character in the last stanza. Took courage and you pulled it off.

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Last hakkaobake 05 April 2009

All I can say is holy s#@t

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