Ramona Thompson


Jack and Jill Rewrite


Jack and Jill went up the hill
To fetch a pail of water
Jack fell down and broke his crown
And Jill came tumbling after

Original Mother Goose Song above

My Reimagined verison of the song below

Jack and Jill went up the hill
Must have been something kinda kinky in that water
'Cause next they knew
Jack fell down complaining of balls so blue
Beggin' Jill to on his grind hers all around
The next day just to be safe
After their hot and heavy lay
Jill took that little pill marked just for the morning after

2009 Ramona Thompson

Submitted: Wednesday, May 06, 2009

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